Tuesday 17 November 2015

Dunger book reviw

Dunger is a  really good book to read because It's an avantris book to read.
There are two town kids living in the country for ten days!
I would advise book to 8+  because of  a little of the language

I give it a 8/10 and at the end the grandad in the book gets injured.Read it to find out if he lives or dies.

Tuesday 3 November 2015

The Great Grey sandwich. Part 1

The Great Grey Sandwich
The inside was dark & still packed with forgotten treasures. Bent pens, fossilized food, unswapd cards & unread notices.


The fateful tuesday, stuart opened his school bag to search for his lunch. Grey fur stirred as the oldest sandwich came to life.


Stu watched in horror as the great grey moldy sandwich slowly crawled carefully out of his bag. It gave him a long sad look and then slithered over to the teachers desk. “Lift me up” it crooked.
“What, why, when, how,” stewart spluttered. “Lift me up” it said getting slightly angry. “No” stewert decided “No I will not lift you up. Then the sandwich let out a horrible cry & stewart got the chills then suddenly all the stuff in ]his bag came to life then the desks and his bag. ‘What am I going to do he thought and then buried in the pile of live furniture paper bags & food.


To find out what happened next read the next one
TO BE CONTINUED!
This story was inspired by my brilliant maths teacher.
The Great Grey Sandwich! Part 2!
Buried in the Great big pile of food, furniture, paper & food Stew had five seconds to think. ‘Why didn’t I lift him up’. It was the end then, his best friend joe came in he saw the mass of objects & he let out a cry. It was unlike the the sandwich had let out. It was a soft cry  of music like bell birds chirping as one all the objects retreated back to their original positions and stood there shrunk like nothing happened except they were polished & buffed. He was holding a spray and a bunch of tishes.

The teacher came in she looked at the spray & tishes he was holding & ten the tables. “Good boy”  “You win the prize of the rubbish cleaning contest a trip to camp pukuno and you are allowed to take one friend. “ Can I take Joe please” said stewart thinking that he owed him one plus  he wanted to know what was going on.

This story was inspired by Mr T & Miss H